domingo, 5 de diciembre de 2010

Wishes (Excercise 5a page 127 in the book) ..!!



Instructions:
Write three things that are not perfect in your life and then write a wish about each situation.


1. I can´t drive. I wish I could drive because my mom said me go out to the store and I
    can't.



2.I don't like my eyelashes. I wish had eyelashes beautifuls.


3.I want to pipi. I wish I went to the bathroom.

domingo, 21 de noviembre de 2010

My seven wonders ♥ ..!!

http://erendida.glogster.com/glog-8815-2321/

Hunt for writing process..!!


1. What are the stages of writing, click on 'stages of writing' and write the answer. 

a) Prewriting. Students generate ideas for writing: brainstorming; reading literature; creating life maps, webs, and story charts; developing word banks; deciding on form, audience, voice, and purpose as well as through teacher motivation.

b) Rough Draft. Students get their ideas on paper. They write without concern for conventions. Written work does not have to be neat; it is a 'sloppy copy.

c) Reread. Students proof their own work by reading aloud and reading for sensibility.

d) Share with a Peer Revisor. Students share and make suggestions for improvement: asking who, what, when, where, why, and how questions about parts of the story the peer does not understand; looking for better words; and talking about how to make the work better.

e) Revise. Improve what the narrative says and how it says it: write additions, imagery, and details. Take out unnecessary work. Use peer suggestions to improve. Clarify.

f) Editing. Work together on editing for mechanics and spelling. Make sure the work is 'goof proof.

g) Final Draft. Students produce their final copy to discuss with the teacher and write a final draft.

h) Publishing. Students publish their written pieces: sending their work to publishers; reading their finished story aloud, making books. This is a time to celebrate!

2. Find out what planning is, by clicking on 'planning'.

Planning your writing is when you think about it in advance.

It helps you: Record your ideas, Come up with new ideas, Organise your thoughts, Check that you have all the information you need.

 For example: Why: Purpose, What: Context and  Who: Audience.

There are lots of different methods such as: Writing a list, Drawing a picture, Thinking about it.

3. How can you plan your writing? Click on 'plan my writing' and write it down.

There are many different ways you can plan your writing. There isn't a correct way to plan; you choose the method that suits you or the situation.
Here are some examples of planning methods:  diagrams, lists and writing frames. 

4. Once you have done your planning, what is next? Check out in 'draft'.

A draft is a rough plan of your writing. There are many benefits, It helps you to:

-Concentrate on the content, the writing, rather than the punctuation, spelling or grammar.
-Check that the writing flows well.
-Do you need to move any ideas around? Have you included everything you wanted to say?
-Look at the layout of your writing. 
-Is it too far up the page? If writing a letter, do you have the address in the correct place?

Egyptian Piramids..!!


The Egyptian pyramids are ancient pyramid shaped masonry structures located in Egypt. There are 138 pyramids discovered in Egypt as of 2008. Most were built as tombs for the country's Pharaohs and their consorts during the Old and Middle Kingdom periods.

The pyramids of Giza are perhaps the only true rival to the Great Sphinx when one thinks of ancient Egypt and its architecture. With the largest Pyramid covering just over nine acres no one can imagine the true size and brilliance of them, until stood beneath one of them, the peak towering for an eternity above you. The Pyramids stand as a marvellous reminder of the skill executed in their creation by the ancient Egyptians and are truly fabulous to see.

sábado, 23 de octubre de 2010

Covering Letter excercise of book..!!


715 Canyon Drive
WA 98102
March 6, 2006


Dear Sir,


I saw your add in the seattle times of march 3 and I'd like to apply for the job. I enclused my résume, i was requested.
I have a great deal of experience in this type of job as I work for 10 years in a similar position. I'm only looking when work because I want to develop my carrer, not because I'm sad in my present job or because my boss is unhappy with me! I'm sure, he will be happy to supply references.
I'd be realty gratefull if you'd consider me for the job I'm know you won't regret it!

Looking forward to hear from you
Sincerely,
Will Cobb



domingo, 10 de octubre de 2010

Funny story ..!!


Anny: I want tell you something
Billy: what happened was tell me. 

Anny: The last weekend Jenny inveted me to a party. 
Billy: And then Anny 
Anny: I arrived and i started to eat pizza. And to me i don't like it the pizza hawaiiana.
        I threw the pinneapple and Jenny fell the trod =S
 Billy: Ohh my god..!!
Anny: You won't believe this, she smile and said don't worry i'm good don't pass nothing. I 
         wanted laugh for this but i can't.
Billy: Wow! that´s amazing!
Anny: Anyway when ocurred this I come back to my house. 

More examples of abstract nouns..!!

  • Inspiration
  • Depression
  • Love
  • Hate
  • Courage
  • Curiosity
  • Excitement
  • Adventure
  • Amazement
  • Faith
  • Ego
  • Failure
  • Awe
  • Freedom
  • Evil
  • Justice
  • Forgiveness
  • Loyalty
  • Romance
  • Infatuation
  • Elegance
  • Imagination
  • Honesty
  • Determination
  • Humor
  • Humility
  • Hope
  • Despair
  • Honor
  • Pride
  • Redemption
  • Hurt
  • Peace
  • Trust
  • Patience
  • Pain
  • Helplessness
  • Pleasure
  • Perseverance
  • Graciousness
  • Gratefulness
  • Grace
  • Grief
  • Maturity
  • Fascination
  • Friendship
  • Brutality
  • Self Control
  • Jealousy
  • Love
  • Confusion
  • Vulnerability
  • Ability
  • Self Esteem
  • Mastery
  • Perfection
  • Excellence